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Reviews
Notes from Melanie (2019)
Impressive Debut
Overall I found this short very pleasurable and was entertained throughout the duration, from previous experience of studying film and writing a short screenplays I really related to the narrative and enjoyed the conflict and juxtaposition between the knock off blockbusters and critically acclaimed films represented thought the two characters Melanie and Joe, The cut away scenes really filled out the dialogue between the two and we're very entertaining to watch being a fan of stuckmann I really felt his own conflict of himself wanting to be a director and what approach he should take or what are you ultimatley trying to achieve when creating a film that accomplishment of self fullment in your own arts work or alternatively a large financial incentive resulting in very rushed cliche work I felt tension build as the two became more intimate whylst reading the script and really felt the emotion between the two characters I enjoyed the score and felt it was very repsentive of the acting taking place in the moment and the ending was ambiguous which I enjoyed aswell as we wonder which path will Joe now take. In Summation I just wanted to appraise Stuckmann for this debut it was extremely professional and well excited with very impressive camera work and ultimately I can't wait to see more